Would you comment on the meter of this poem? ?
The Cycle
By C.S. Scotkin
Ocean breathing
warm, moist briny
exhalations
giving birth to
clouds assembling,
rising madly
from horizons
come the warnings
tortured winds blow
chased by light’ning
cursed by thunder
from dark bellies
buck shot rain falls
on a land parched
thirsting greatly.
River fills now
muddy torrent
blooms the desert
as it passes
frantic searching
for the ocean.
River yearns for home.
The meter of this poem is fine. I like ocean poems. In this one, I especially like the image ‘River yearns for home,” in which you personify the river as being away from home and yearning to return. The ‘frantic searching,’ along the obstacle-filled pathway is super.
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